[ { "id": "pistol.last-round", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "LAST ROUND", "tier": "MYTHIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 7, "cine": 7, "brut_why": "The round punches through his raised palm and blows the eye out on its nerve: a specific, nasty wound held in a close.", "cine_why": "Moonlit hush, an EMPTY insert, a 3D roll round the flipping gun, then the tracer ride through the palm: purposeful shots.", "fix": "Hold the final on the palm and face together with torn skin and wet highlights; the film runs 19 s, cut the build to fit 15.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.last-round.jpg", "len": 19.3, "script": 8, "script_why": "The last bullet in the game fired through the pleading hand into the eye: a strong, simple, memorable idea.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The eye on its nerve and the palm hole have detail; the body is a flat purple blob and the pool is plain." }, { "id": "pistol.the-pendulum", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "THE PENDULUM", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "The kneecap shots and blood fans are fine, but the blade never takes the head: the final is a face with one thin red slit.", "cine_why": "The swinging lamp, the metronome hand and the lowering stages are staged clearly; then it parks on a long static face close.", "fix": "Pay the concept off: the blade splits the skull or takes the head, with a wet open wound held on screen.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.the-pendulum.jpg", "len": 18.2, "script": 8, "script_why": "The pit and the pendulum played with gunshots lowering a saw-toothed lamp: one of the best concepts on the page.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "The lamp's teeth and the chain read; the wound is a thin line on a plain face, little gore anatomy." }, { "id": "pistol.red-light", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "RED LIGHT", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "The shot foot and the round through the eye give some blood, but the final is a tidy eye wound with a few streaks.", "cine_why": "The traffic light, the turned back and the whip round read well; the fly-on-the-eye inset is a good beat.", "fix": "End on the eye shot as a real wound (socket, exit spray, the fly in the blood), not a tidy red circle.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.red-light.jpg", "len": 19.7, "script": 7, "script_why": "Red light, green light with a pistol and a fly that makes her move: a playful, clear game structure.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "Flat cartoon cat face with a plain eye wound; the field and the light are simple." }, { "id": "pistol.split-decision", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "SPLIT DECISION", "tier": "MYTHIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 7, "brut_why": "Both eyes shot out by the split round and the hand pinned to the wall by the knife, with a long wall smear.", "cine_why": "Bullet-time on the knife, a FROM THE BLADE instant replay and the slide down the wall: well-chosen angles.", "fix": "Make the eyes ruined (split sockets, the blade halves in them) and hold a close on the pinned hand: MYTHIC needs real horror.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.split-decision.jpg", "len": 18.0, "script": 8, "script_why": "He brings a knife to a gunfight and the gun uses it: the split round on the blade is a clever MYTHIC idea.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "Two red eye rings on a flat head; the pinned hand and the smear are simple shapes." }, { "id": "pistol.six-feet", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "SIX FEET", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "Shot straight up under the jaw: the skull top blows open in a jagged red crown, buried six feet under.", "cine_why": "A worm's-eye look up the barrel, the tooth tinking back onto the gun and the cut underground all land.", "fix": "Show the exit properly (brain and bone through the crown, the jaw blown) before the burial cut.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.six-feet.jpg", "len": 14.2, "script": 7, "script_why": "The gravedigger's measure and the gold tooth back on the barrel: a neat pun with a good button.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The jagged skull and the underground soil cut-away add detail; the face and blood are flat." }, { "id": "pistol.crowd-control", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "CROWD CONTROL", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "One round through two men: the second ends with his ribcage torn open and a pool, a solid but small wound.", "cine_why": "The alignment line turning gold and the x-ray ride through the first ribcage are good; the rest is a wide fall.", "fix": "Hold the x-ray exit as real gore on both men (the first's chest blown out, the second's spine) in the final.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.crowd-control.jpg", "len": 16.6, "script": 6, "script_why": "Two for one on a lined-up shot is a familiar idea, told cleanly.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The open ribs are drawn; bodies and pools are flat." }, { "id": "pistol.toe-tag", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "TOE TAG", "tier": "MYTHIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 7, "brut_why": "A shot through a sheet and a clean dead face in the drawer: almost no wound on screen for a MYTHIC.", "cine_why": "The morgue tension (the fog through the sheet, the held breath, the SLAM of the drawer) is genuinely cinematic.", "fix": "Give the shot a body: the round through the sheet into her face with blood soaking up through the cloth; 22 s also runs long.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.toe-tag.jpg", "len": 22.0, "script": 8, "script_why": "Hiding among the dead and betrayed by her own breath fog: an excellent horror premise.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "The cold room has slab and drawer detail; the death itself is a plain face." }, { "id": "pistol.the-gap", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "THE GAP", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 7, "brut_why": "The eye comes out on its nerve through the gap, a weeping socket and blood streaks, held in a tight close.", "cine_why": "The 11 MM measuring overlay, the reverse on Faris and the ride through the gap make a tense standoff.", "fix": "Add the exit (the back of the head opened against the wall) and the hostage's reaction in the same final.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.the-gap.jpg", "len": 14.8, "script": 8, "script_why": "A hostage with a gap exactly one bullet wide that cuts one hair: a strong precision-shot idea.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The eye on its nerve has detail; the head and body are flat shapes." }, { "id": "pistol.overflow", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "OVERFLOW", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 7, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "The chest is split open, the rain fills the cavity round the heart, and the downward shot bursts it in red.", "cine_why": "The rain-filling chest insert is a strong image, but most of the film sits on one lying body.", "fix": "Cut more: a low close on the filling chest, the heart beating in the water, the burst in slow motion.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.overflow.jpg", "len": 14.8, "script": 7, "script_why": "The rain fills his opened chest like a cup and one shot spills it: a poetic, specific kill.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The ribcage and the cavity are drawn with some detail; the body and the pool are flat." }, { "id": "pistol.down-the-barrel", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "DOWN THE BARREL", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 7, "brut_why": "A small head wound on a flat body in a pool: the kill itself is tidy.", "cine_why": "The cut inside the rifled barrel, framing her through the bore, is the best camera idea in the film.", "fix": "Make the point-blank shot horrific: her face blown open at the muzzle, seen from inside the barrel.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.down-the-barrel.jpg", "len": 15.2, "script": 7, "script_why": "The last thing she sees is the inside of the barrel, after she spits on it: a strong, mean beat.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "The rifling insert is detailed; the victim and wound are plain shapes." }, { "id": "pistol.hung-on-the-wall", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "HUNG ON THE WALL", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "Pinned flat into the painting with blood running from the eyes and mouth: creepy but more stylish than gory.", "cine_why": "The gallery walk and the gilded frame are nice, but it then sits on one static portrait for half its 20 s.", "fix": "Show the chest wound tearing through the canvas and the painted faces turning to watch; trim to 15 s.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.hung-on-the-wall.jpg", "len": 20.2, "script": 7, "script_why": "Shot into a painting he becomes the newest portrait while the painted dead watch: a memorable concept.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The gallery and the painted texture add detail; the body is a flat cut-out." }, { "id": "pistol.gun-kata", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "GUN KATA", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "One neat head hole with powder stippling on a lying body: tidy.", "cine_why": "The disarm and the catch read, but the kata itself is a few side-on poses.", "fix": "Choreograph the five moves with impact frames and end on a point-blank shot that opens the skull.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.gun-kata.jpg", "len": 13.7, "script": 6, "script_why": "Disarmed on the first move and killed with his own gun on the last: a decent martial-arts idea.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "Stippled powder burns are the only detail; poses and body are plain." }, { "id": "pistol.photo-finish", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "PHOTO FINISH", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 7, "brut_why": "Shot point blank in the gut: the torso opens with organs and ribs on show beside the dead face.", "cine_why": "The race HUD, the sepia slit-scan photo finish and the walk back are well staged.", "fix": "Hold the photo-finish freeze on the shot itself (the exit frozen mid-burst) as the final picture.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.photo-finish.jpg", "len": 15.2, "script": 6, "script_why": "A footrace decided by a photo finish, then the loser shot: fun, though the link to the pistol is loose.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "Exposed organs have some detail; the rest is flat colour." }, { "id": "pistol.interrogation", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "INTERROGATION", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "Kneecap shots and one small head hole in the dark: little gore for the build-up.", "cine_why": "The swing round the chair and the bulb are fine; most shots are a static side view with speech bubbles.", "fix": "Light the last shot with a muzzle flash in the dark and show the head wound in that flash.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.interrogation.jpg", "len": 16.6, "script": 7, "script_why": "A bulb that works as a lie detector, shot out on the truth: clever.", "anim": 3, "anim_why": "Almost no detail: a plain body, a small hole, flat bubbles." }, { "id": "pistol.apple-of-my-eye", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "APPLE OF MY EYE", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "The second apple is shot through his laughing mouth: a bloody face, but the wound stays simple.", "cine_why": "The ten paces, the apple pop and the lob into the mouth are clearly staged with an insert.", "fix": "Make the apple shot go through the back of the head: pulp, teeth and skull in a close.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.apple-of-my-eye.jpg", "len": 16.2, "script": 6, "script_why": "A William Tell trick shot that turns into a roast-pig apple in the mouth: a good gag.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "Apple chunks and a flat face; little wound detail." }, { "id": "pistol.firing-squad", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "FIRING SQUAD OF ONE", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "A row of chest holes and blood up the wall behind her: a volley, but each hole is tidy.", "cine_why": "The ghost copies of Faris barely read in the strip; the volley is one wide shot plus an x-ray inset.", "fix": "Make the copies read (five Farises in one frame) and show the volley tearing her open against the post.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.firing-squad.jpg", "len": 16.0, "script": 7, "script_why": "A whole firing squad played by one man leaving copies at each post: a clever script.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "Simple holes and a flat wall splash." }, { "id": "pistol.stained-glass", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "STAINED GLASS", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "He becomes a stained-glass window that shatters: shards and a little blood, no flesh wound.", "cine_why": "The window inking round him, the light rays and the shatter are attractive shots.", "fix": "Let the glass cut him: the shards bleeding, the saint's face cracking into his real one.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.stained-glass.jpg", "len": 16.6, "script": 6, "script_why": "Turned into a church window and shot like a saint: pretty, but not frightening.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "Leaded glass and the shard pile are detailed; the body inside it is plain." }, { "id": "pistol.the-jam", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "THE JAM", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "A forehead hole through the bump with a smear of blood and a pool: neat but plain.", "cine_why": "The jam insert and the slow-motion catch of the round are good beats.", "fix": "Make the second trip brutal: the round through the bump blowing the back of the skull out in a held close.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.the-jam.jpg", "len": 15.0, "script": 7, "script_why": "One round, two trips: it bonks his forehead first, then goes through the bump. Clever.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "The cartridge prop reads; the wound and face are flat." }, { "id": "pistol.campfire", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "CAMPFIRE", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "script", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "Script: she pitches into the fire, chars and crumbles to ash, her charred skull on the embers.", "cine_why": "Script: firelight as the only light, a slow push, a lean-in close and a rise with the smoke skull.", "fix": "Build it with the burning shown in detail (blistering skin, the skull in the embers), not a quick ash swap.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": null, "len": null, "script": 7, "script_why": "Script: a ghost story by the fire whose punchline is the gun, told in smoke: a lovely premise.", "anim": null, "anim_why": null }, { "id": "pistol.voodoo-poster", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "VOODOO POSTER", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 7, "brut_why": "Knee, hand and heart shot through the poster, ending with his chest torn open and blood across the floor.", "cine_why": "Split panels POSTER | MAN on every shot and the ALIVE crossed-out insert are a strong visual system.", "fix": "Show each poster hit as a matching wound on him, building to the heart blown out.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.voodoo-poster.jpg", "len": 14.8, "script": 8, "script_why": "Whatever is shot on the wanted poster happens to the man: a great voodoo idea that fits a western pistol.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The poster panels and the open chest have detail; body and pool are flat." }, { "id": "pistol.call-dropped", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "CALL DROPPED", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "The round goes through the phone into her head: the skull splits with phone shards stuck in it, blood fans.", "cine_why": "The phone glow as the only light and the CALL ENDED macro insert set the mood.", "fix": "Hold the final on the cracked screen fused into the split head, lit by its glow.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.call-dropped.jpg", "len": 13.8, "script": 6, "script_why": "She calls for help and the call is dropped through her head: a good grim pun.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "Phone shards in the wound add detail; the face and body are flat." }, { "id": "pistol.checkmate", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "CHECKMATE", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "Knee and shoulder shots, then the head: the skull top open with the brain showing, on the chessboard.", "cine_why": "The chess clock, the score sheet insert and the top-down board are a nice graphic idea.", "fix": "Make each CHECK wound visible and the CHECKMATE shot burst the head over the board.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.checkmate.jpg", "len": 14.0, "script": 6, "script_why": "A chess game answered by shots written on the score sheet: neat, a little cold.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The exposed brain and the board have detail; the poses are plain." }, { "id": "pistol.going-down", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "GOING DOWN", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "Shot off three floors to the boards: a head wound with blood and a bruised face.", "cine_why": "A tall wide of the three levels and the lift indicator gag are clear.", "fix": "Show the landings crushing him floor by floor and end on a broken body at G.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.going-down.jpg", "len": 12.8, "script": 6, "script_why": "An elevator going down, one shot per floor: a fun idea, light on payoff.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "The lift indicator prop reads; the head wound and body are plain." }, { "id": "pistol.bubble-gum", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "BUBBLE GUM", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "His head swells like the bubble and bursts: an exposed, veined brain and a bulging bloodshot eye.", "cine_why": "The close on the chewing and the slow bubble, then the hidden shot on the POP, are well timed.", "fix": "Hold the pop itself: the head bursting in slow motion with skull and gum flying.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.bubble-gum.jpg", "len": 13.8, "script": 6, "script_why": "The shot hidden in a gum bubble's pop and the head popping too: playful and memorable.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The swollen head has brain and vein texture; the rest is flat." }, { "id": "pistol.call-it", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "CALL IT", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "A coin punched flush into her forehead with a thin trickle: tidy, almost bloodless.", "cine_why": "The slow coin flip, the HEADS caption and the split-frame close are good.", "fix": "Let the coin go through: an exit wound behind her and the coin visible deep in a ruined forehead.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.call-it.jpg", "len": 14.5, "script": 6, "script_why": "A two-headed coin that ends up in her forehead heads-up: a neat gag.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "The coin prop reads; the face and wound are plain." }, { "id": "pistol.skin-classic", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "WHITE DOVES", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "skin", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "The eye shot out with blood pouring and red doves falling: some gore, mostly a tidy head wound.", "cine_why": "The slow-motion backwards dive through the doves is a real action-movie shot.", "fix": "Make the five rounds visibly hit and end on the red doves landing on a torn body.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.skin-classic.jpg", "len": 17.4, "script": 5, "script_why": "A John Woo homage: fitting for a classic skin but familiar.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "The doves add motion; the body and wound are flat." }, { "id": "pistol.skin-taped", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "THUP", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "skin", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "A single neat temple hole with a thin trickle on a sleeping woman.", "cine_why": "The DIY silencer insert and the close are fine, otherwise static.", "fix": "Show the temple shot properly (the exit through the pillow side) and the bottle's burst plastic.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.skin-taped.jpg", "len": 13.6, "script": 5, "script_why": "A bottle silencer and a quiet kill: a small idea.", "anim": 3, "anim_why": "Very little detail: a plain face, a dot of a wound." }, { "id": "pistol.skin-camo", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "BEAR TRAP", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "skin", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "The bear trap bites the shin with blood, but the final hides the body behind a trophy polaroid.", "cine_why": "The grass-level charge, the SNAP and the polaroid trophy photo are well staged.", "fix": "Move the polaroid aside: end on the trapped, shattered shin and the head shot clearly.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.skin-camo.jpg", "len": 14.4, "script": 7, "script_why": "A hunter's trap and a hunter's trophy photo: a good camo idea.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "The trap and polaroid props have some detail; the wound is covered." }, { "id": "pistol.skin-cartoon", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "GOOD BOY", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "skin", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "The cartoon round catches her behind the tower: torso ripped open with ribs, blood up the wall.", "cine_why": "The toy-speed round, the chase and the return to the barrel are followed clearly.", "fix": "Show the bullet's attack on screen instead of behind the tower, then the torn body.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.skin-cartoon.jpg", "len": 15.4, "script": 7, "script_why": "A cartoon bullet that hunts her like a dog: fun, fits the cartoon skin.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "Ribs and the wall smear have some detail; the cartoon body is flat." }, { "id": "pistol.skin-ice", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "ICICLE", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "skin", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "The giant icicle drops through his skull and pins him, blood running down in stripes.", "cine_why": "The push up to the growing icicles and the worm's-eye drop work.", "fix": "Show the impact frame-by-frame and the icicle exiting through the jaw.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.skin-ice.jpg", "len": 14.8, "script": 7, "script_why": "Every miss was the plan, growing the icicle that kills him: a clever ice skin.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The icicles and the blood stripes have some detail; the body is flat." }, { "id": "pistol.skin-neon", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "TARGET LOCK", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "skin", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "Six locks and a burst, but the final is a lying body with a reticle and little visible wound.", "cine_why": "The neon HUD, the scan and the damage report give a strong overlay look.", "fix": "Make the six hits visible wounds on the wireframe and the body, ending on the damage report over gore.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.skin-neon.jpg", "len": 14.2, "script": 6, "script_why": "A targeting computer doing its job: stylish, emotionally flat.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "The HUD is detailed; the death itself is plain." }, { "id": "pistol.skin-gold", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "KINTSUGI", "tier": "MYTHIC", "kind": "skin", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "Cracked like porcelain, mended in gold and shattered: shards with some blood, more art than horror.", "cine_why": "The crash on the glazing, the exhibit and the shatter are well framed; 18.9 s is long.", "fix": "Make the cracks open flesh under the glaze and end on the face breaking apart; trim to 15 s.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.skin-gold.jpg", "len": 18.9, "script": 8, "script_why": "Kintsugi (cracked, mended with gold, displayed, broken for good) is a beautiful MYTHIC concept.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "Gold seams and porcelain shards are detailed; the face is simple." }, { "id": "pistol.mid-hollow-point", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "HOLLOW POINT", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "He drains through one small hole into a dried husk with a skull face: creepy but small in frame.", "cine_why": "A tight two-shot and a push onto the husk; then the zone camera pulls far out.", "fix": "Keep the camera close on the drain and the husk; make the outflow wet and visible.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.mid-hollow-point.jpg", "len": 8.2, "script": 7, "script_why": "Hollow point taken literally, he comes out hollow: a strong mid idea.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The husk, skull and dried texture are detailed for a mid." }, { "id": "pistol.mid-achilles", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "ACHILLES", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 3, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "A heel shot, a fall and a small head hole: little gore, tiny in frame.", "cine_why": "Side-on follow of the run and the fall, then a static zone shot.", "fix": "Show the tendon snapping up the calf in a close, then the head shot.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.mid-achilles.jpg", "len": 7.6, "script": 5, "script_why": "Shot in the heel, he runs until the tendon goes: a modest idea.", "anim": 3, "anim_why": "Plain body and small wounds." }, { "id": "pistol.mid-scared-stiff", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "SCARED STIFF", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 3, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "Turned to stone and shattered: a cracked skull face and rubble, little blood.", "cine_why": "The slow raise and the statue tipping over read.", "fix": "Show flesh inside the broken stone: the statue breaks and bleeds.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.mid-scared-stiff.jpg", "len": 7.0, "script": 7, "script_why": "Scared stiff made literal: neat.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "Stone texture and the cracked skull have some detail." }, { "id": "pistol.mid-live-wire", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "LIVE WIRE", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "Electrocuted by the freed cable: a charred, cracked body with blood, small in frame.", "cine_why": "A crash on the cable, the arcs and the spasm read.", "fix": "Keep a close on the burning body: smoking skin, the eyes boiling.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.mid-live-wire.jpg", "len": 7, "script": 6, "script_why": "The round frees the current, which finds her: a fair idea.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "Electric arcs and burn cracks add some detail." }, { "id": "pistol.mid-mozambique", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "MOZAMBIQUE", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 3, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "Two chest holes and a head hole: tidy, little blood.", "cine_why": "The brass-only idea is diluted; the close is on the body.", "fix": "Commit to the brass-only camera and let the hand fall in frame beside a blood-soaked casing.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.mid-mozambique.jpg", "len": 7.1, "script": 6, "script_why": "The drill told by the brass alone: a nice idea.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "Plain holes on a flat body." }, { "id": "pistol.mid-in-amber", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "IN AMBER", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 2, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "Sealed in amber with no wound to speak of: the round only frees the sap.", "cine_why": "A close on the face behind the amber, then a wide.", "fix": "Make the amber crush him or show the wound bleeding into the sap.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.mid-in-amber.jpg", "len": 7.0, "script": 7, "script_why": "Preserved like a mosquito in amber: a beautiful idea, but not a brutal one.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "The amber block is mostly a flat orange shape." }, { "id": "pistol.mid-black-round", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "THE BLACK ROUND", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 3, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "Aged to death into a skeleton with flowers growing through it: eerie, small and bloodless.", "cine_why": "The casting of the black round is staged; the ageing is seen from far away.", "fix": "Hold the ageing in a close: skin wrinkling, rotting and sloughing off the skull.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.mid-black-round.jpg", "len": 7.7, "script": 7, "script_why": "A cast black round that ages him to death: a strong, original mid.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "Skeleton, worm and grass details are good for a mid." }, { "id": "pistol.mid-curiosity", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "CURIOSITY", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "He looks down the barrel and his face is blown open (teeth, skull, brain) in one close, then tiny.", "cine_why": "The table cover, the hole and the eye at the barrel are clear.", "fix": "Hold the close on the ruined face longer before the zone returns.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.mid-curiosity.jpg", "len": 7.5, "script": 7, "script_why": "Curiosity killed the cat: he looks down the barrel through the hole. Clever.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The torn face has teeth and brain detail." }, { "id": "pistol.mid-x-ring", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "X RING", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 3, "cine": 5, "brut_why": "He turns into a paper target and is shot to shreds: paper, holes, a little blood.", "cine_why": "The range buzzer and the paper flip are fine.", "fix": "Make the paper bleed: the target tears and the man inside it shows through.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.mid-x-ring.jpg", "len": 7.5, "script": 6, "script_why": "Becoming a paper target at the range: fun.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "Paper shreds and holes, simple." }, { "id": "pistol.mid-tether", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "TETHER", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "The lanyard garrotte cuts a red ring into his neck, blood and a bloodshot eye.", "cine_why": "The slap, the swing of the pistol on its cord and the garrotte are well staged.", "fix": "The over-the-shoulder garrotte lift reads as a neck hang (rule): keep him on the ground and cut the neck open in a close.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.mid-tether.jpg", "len": 7.5, "script": 6, "script_why": "The pistol on its lanyard becomes a garrotte: neat.", "anim": 4, "anim_why": "The neck wound has some detail; poses are plain." }, { "id": "pistol.last-bubble", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "LAST BUBBLE", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "Drowned with a grey skull-like face and bloody eyes in a red cloud: eerie, little wound.", "cine_why": "The scream bubble rising to the surface and the gull cut is a great cinematic beat.", "fix": "Add the shot's real wound: the round tearing his throat as the last bubble goes.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.last-bubble.jpg", "len": 14.8, "script": 7, "script_why": "Under water a man can only scream once, and the sea carries it up: poetic.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "Bubbles, the skull face and the water have some detail." }, { "id": "pistol.shark-bait", "weapon": "pistol", "title": "SHARK BAIT", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "brut_why": "The shark tears him open: intestines trailing in a blood cloud.", "cine_why": "The red cloud, the shark in the dark and Faris backing away are staged clearly.", "fix": "Show the bite itself in a close: the shark's jaws in his torso, the water turning black-red.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-E", "sheet": "img/62/pistol/pistol.shark-bait.jpg", "len": 13.8, "script": 6, "script_why": "The blood is the bait: Faris just gets out of the way. Solid.", "anim": 5, "anim_why": "The shark and the trailing guts have some detail." } ]