[ { "id": "fists.one-punch", "weapon": "fists", "title": "ONE PUNCH", "tier": "MYTHIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "script": 8, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "Promised red mist; on screen he stays standing with one bloody crater in his face and a few blood splats: mild for a MYTHIC.", "cine_why": "Hit-count panels, a yawn close-up, a manga impact frame and a replay are good devices, but it ends on a static close and runs 23 s.", "script_why": "Twelve hits for zero damage, a yawn, then one jab that erases him: a great One-Punch-Man setup and payoff.", "anim_why": "Nice panel and manga graphics, but the wound is one plain red crater on a flat body.", "fix": "Deliver the erasure: the body bursting to mist from the fist outward with the sky tearing behind, held in one wide hero shot.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.one-punch.jpg", "len": 23.2 }, { "id": "fists.the-mirror", "weapon": "fists", "title": "THE MIRROR", "tier": "MYTHIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 7, "cine": 7, "script": 8, "anim": 6, "brut_why": "Mirror cracks slice through him: torso opened to x-ray organs, a broken jaw with teeth, blood across the glass: properly gory.", "cine_why": "Barrel-roll through the puddle into the hall, whips between mirrors, the crack running across glass and body: purposeful camera.", "script_why": "His reflection dies a beat before he does, in a hall where Faris has no reflection: original and eerie.", "anim_why": "X-ray organs, teeth, glass cracks and a mirrored hall: some of the richest detail on the page.", "fix": "Hold a cleaner final on the shards dropping through him like blades; the cracked body at XT is cluttered and hard to read.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.the-mirror.jpg", "len": 20.45 }, { "id": "fists.ninth-circle", "weapon": "fists", "title": "NINTH CIRCLE", "tier": "MYTHIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 7, "script": 8, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "His head sits in the ice with a frozen scream and red cracks round it; the promised shattering into red-cored chunks barely reads.", "cine_why": "Strong compositions: the freezing boots low, the winged colossus wide, the split at the ice line and a manga hammer fist.", "script_why": "Cocytus with everyone Faris killed frozen under the ice, watching: a rich, dark MYTHIC concept.", "anim_why": "The realm set is detailed (colossus, frozen faces, ice shards); the head and body are plain shapes.", "fix": "Show the frozen head bursting into red-cored ice chunks skating across the lake, then hold on the headless body sinking among the dead.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.ninth-circle.jpg", "len": 19.2 }, { "id": "fists.hook-hall", "weapon": "fists", "title": "HOOK HALL", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 7, "cine": 6, "script": 7, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Hung on a meat hook driven up under his jaw, eyes rolled white, mouth torn open, blood down the line: grim and specific.", "cine_why": "A tracking line of carcasses with STATION cards, but most shots are the same side two-shot down the line.", "script_why": "A hell slaughter line where every carcass is him, worked like a factory: dark and memorable.", "anim_why": "Hooks, a line of carcasses, rolled eyes and a torn mouth; the bodies are flat copies.", "fix": "The hook enters under the jaw, which reads close to hanging by the neck (banned): move it through the chest or back and keep the face free.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.hook-hall.jpg", "len": 18.02 }, { "id": "fists.re-entry", "weapon": "fists", "title": "RE ENTRY", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 7, "cine": 7, "script": 8, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "He lands as a meteor: a charred skull face grinning out of a burnt red-black body in the crater: memorable.", "cine_why": "The ride up past the clouds, the curve of the world, the hard cut to Faris waiting and the impact wide: good shot choices.", "script_why": "An uppercut so hard he burns up on re-entry and lands in Faris's footprints: funny, huge and weapon-fitting.", "anim_why": "A drawn charred skull and crater debris; the burnt body is flat red-black.", "fix": "Linger on the burning re-entry close and the hand reaching out of the crater before it crumbles; the payoff close is static.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.re-entry.jpg", "len": 16.85 }, { "id": "fists.the-plan", "weapon": "fists", "title": "THE PLAN", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 8, "script": 9, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "An eye torn out on its stalk and a bloody crater in the forehead; strong but compact for a LEGENDARY.", "cine_why": "The blueprint overlay, the memory-recall rewind and the 3.20 timer drive the camera: clever, clear and well paced.", "script_why": "Faris plans every blow and the time of death, then it happens exactly so: a superb, Sherlock-style concept.", "anim_why": "The blueprint overlay is finely drawn; the eye on its stalk is the only gore detail.", "fix": "Make the planned death bigger than one head wound: the 3.20 moment should end on a gorier, held hero frame.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.the-plan.jpg", "len": 21.51 }, { "id": "fists.stop-hitting-yourself", "weapon": "fists", "title": "STOP HITTING YOURSELF", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 7, "cine": 6, "script": 8, "anim": 6, "brut_why": "Beaten with his own torn-off arm until the skull opens: pink brain, an empty socket and a wide blood pool at XT.", "cine_why": "A caption burst and an impact flash, but the beating itself is told in flat side two-shots.", "script_why": "Tearing his arm off and beating him with it, schoolyard taunt made literal: brutal and darkly funny.", "anim_why": "An exposed brain, an empty socket, the torn arm and a big pool: real gore detail.", "fix": "Stage the beating from a low angle with each blow of the dead fist as its own beat, ending on the arm dropped beside the open skull.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.stop-hitting-yourself.jpg", "len": 16.99 }, { "id": "fists.seven-points", "weapon": "fists", "title": "SEVEN POINTS", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 5, "script": 8, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "The seven points burst on the swollen body, red rings and veins over a blood pool: messy rather than horrifying for a LEGENDARY.", "cine_why": "The tap crawl and the subtitle work, but two frames are near-empty dark skies and the burst is never shown wide.", "script_why": "Fist of the North Star's 'you are already dead' with the Big Dipper lighting on him and in the sky: a great concept.", "anim_why": "Glowing rings and a few veins over a flat green body.", "fix": "Show the seventh-step burst in a wide hero shot, then tilt up to the seven red stars; fill the empty sky frames with the swelling body.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.seven-points.jpg", "len": 17.39 }, { "id": "fists.heartstrings", "weapon": "fists", "title": "HEARTSTRINGS", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 7, "cine": 5, "script": 8, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "The heart torn out on its arteries with the ribs showing, the dead face strung up on the red cords: nasty and specific.", "cine_why": "Mostly repeated side two-shots of Faris tugging; no wide that shows the puppet show.", "script_why": "A dead man worked like a marionette on his own heartstrings: a strong, horrible image.", "anim_why": "Heart, arteries and ribs are drawn; the puppet body itself is plain.", "fix": "Give the puppet show a stage: wide shots of the dead man made to dance, then a close as the strings snap and he drops.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.heartstrings.jpg", "len": 16.25 }, { "id": "fists.spineless", "weapon": "fists", "title": "SPINELESS", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 8, "cine": 6, "script": 8, "anim": 6, "brut_why": "His head held up with the whole spine dangling from it, the dead eye open and blood dripping: classic, brutal and clear.", "cine_why": "A begging 'please', the manga impact and a held close on the head and spine; staging is mostly the same tight two-shot.", "script_why": "The coward made literally spineless, Mortal Kombat style: a direct, memorable fist fatality.", "anim_why": "Vertebrae drawn bone by bone, a bloodshot eye and drips: clear anatomical detail.", "fix": "Add a beat where the boneless body folds to the floor in frame and Faris swings the head on its spine before the final close.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.spineless.jpg", "len": 15.63 }, { "id": "fists.one-inch", "weapon": "fists", "title": "ONE INCH", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "A crater through his chest with the ribs bared and blood blown out behind him: solid but tidy.", "cine_why": "Mostly one tight two-shot from the same side; the cone of destruction behind him is barely framed.", "script_why": "The one-inch punch where all the force goes through him and blows out everything behind: a clean, weapon-true idea.", "anim_why": "A rib crater with blood; the body and the saloon stay simple.", "fix": "Cut to a wide from behind him so the back blowout and the exploding cone fill the frame, then hold on the open chest.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.one-inch.jpg", "len": 15.06 }, { "id": "fists.freight-train", "weapon": "fists", "title": "FREIGHT TRAIN", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 7, "cine": 6, "script": 6, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Driven through door after door until she's a pincushion of wooden splinters with blood sprayed up the wall: messy and violent.", "cine_why": "Planned path lines, a KLANG charge through the frames and a wide of the wrecked corridor give it shape; the final is a busy close.", "script_why": "A shoulder charge that carries her through every door and table in the castle: physical, but not a very surprising idea.", "anim_why": "Lots of splinters, debris and spray; the body under them is a plain shape.", "fix": "End on a cleaner, held image: her pinned to the last wall by one big plank through the chest, the wrecked doors behind her.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.freight-train.jpg", "len": 15.26 }, { "id": "fists.monument", "weapon": "fists", "title": "MONUMENT", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "Turned to a bronze statue mid-uppercut with a line of blood from the mouth; the stone spray arc reads, but there's little horror.", "cine_why": "A good low uppercut, then the plinth, the pigeon and the posing tourist give it comic staging; the final close is cluttered.", "script_why": "The perfect uppercut set in marble on its own spray, with a plaque and a pigeon: a witty monument gag.", "anim_why": "The statue is a flat bronze silhouette; only the plinth and pigeon add detail.", "fix": "Keep the face readable in the stone: the snapped jaw and teeth set in marble at XT, with the plinth plaque in frame.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.monument.jpg", "len": 13.57 }, { "id": "fists.jackpot", "weapon": "fists", "title": "JACKPOT", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "script": 6, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "Her chest split open with coins spilling from it and blood from the mouth; more gag than horror.", "cine_why": "Slot-reel DING inserts, a JACKPOT card and a coin shower give it rhythm; the final is a static close.", "script_why": "Punching her like a one-armed bandit until she pays out a jackpot: playful and fun, but light.", "anim_why": "Slot reels and coins add props; the wound is plain flat colour.", "fix": "Make the payout gruesome: coins and teeth pouring out of a split torso in a held low close, the reels showing three skulls.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.jackpot.jpg", "len": 16.91 }, { "id": "fists.knock-the-stuffing-out", "weapon": "fists", "title": "KNOCK THE STUFFING OUT", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "He goes limp as a stitched rag doll with his real guts spilling out of the split seams in a blood pool: odd and moderately grim.", "cine_why": "Comic FLUMP impact, then mostly the same side medium; the final close is busy with stitches and guts.", "script_why": "Punching the stuffing out of a man until he becomes a ragdoll with real insides: a playful, weapon-fitting idea.", "anim_why": "Stitches, stuffing and guts give texture; the rest is flat.", "fix": "Make the reveal turn: stuffing first, then real intestines in a held close as the seams split, so the joke becomes horror.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.knock-the-stuffing-out.jpg", "len": 14.87 }, { "id": "fists.the-brink", "weapon": "fists", "title": "THE BRINK", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "script": 6, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "Folded head-down into a NO DUMPING dumpster after the fall, a broken leg jutting up and a blood pool: more comic than horrific.", "cine_why": "The SUPLEX card, numbered fall insets and the cut down to the dumpster are well chosen; the final close is cramped.", "script_why": "Letting her bull him to the edge, then suplexing her off it: a decent reversal with a dumpster gag.", "anim_why": "The dumpster prop and a little blood; the body is flat.", "fix": "Make the landing hurt: show the impact on the dumpster rim in slow motion, then hold on the bent body and the open dead face.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.the-brink.jpg", "len": 12.39 }, { "id": "fists.slam-dunk", "weapon": "fists", "title": "SLAM DUNK", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "script": 7, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Jammed through the hoop, the rim crushing into his chest, the net soaked red and dripping, dazed dead eye: fairly brutal.", "cine_why": "A SLAM DUNK impact card and a tilt up to him hanging in the hoop; a clear payoff shot, though the final crop is tight.", "script_why": "Dunking the victim through a basketball hoop that cuts into him: a fun, punchy idea for a RARE.", "anim_why": "Net, rim and dripping blood are drawn; the body is plain.", "fix": "Keep the rim clearly at the chest (it reads near the neck, close to the banned hanging image) and widen the final to show the net and the drip.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.slam-dunk.jpg", "len": 13.59 }, { "id": "fists.hit-me", "weapon": "fists", "title": "HIT ME", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 3, "brut_why": "He turns into a grey, blotchy husk with bleeding eyes and blood down his front; the promised hollow husk blowing away never happens.", "cine_why": "A POW impact, then a long static medium on a red-tinted background while nothing moves.", "script_why": "The strongman's 'hit me as hard as you can' dare, answered with a punch that empties him: a good premise.", "anim_why": "Grey blotches and red eye streaks on an undetailed body.", "fix": "Pay off the script: the emptied husk crumpling light as paper and tumbling away across the floor like tumbleweed.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.hit-me.jpg", "len": 12.2 }, { "id": "fists.kidney-stones", "weapon": "fists", "title": "KIDNEY STONES", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "White crystal shards burst out through his back and side with a sheet of blood below, eyes rolled: striking but clean.", "cine_why": "A KRSSH impact and then the same side medium held; the final close crops the shards awkwardly.", "script_why": "Kidney punches that make real kidney stones burst out of him as crystals: a decent pun-kill.", "anim_why": "Simple white crystal shapes and a flat blood sheet.", "fix": "Grow the crystals in beats with each punch and finish on a wide where he stands skewered from inside, then folds.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.kidney-stones.jpg", "len": 13.13 }, { "id": "fists.coconuts", "weapon": "fists", "title": "COCONUTS", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 7, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "Two heads clapped together until the skulls split and fuse at a bloody seam, eyes hanging out: gross and memorable.", "cine_why": "One impact frame, then a static frontal close on the fused heads held for seconds.", "script_why": "Clapping two heads like coconut halves with a hollow clop, and they stay stuck: a funny, nasty two-victim idea.", "anim_why": "A cracked seam and two hanging eyes; otherwise flat shapes.", "fix": "Add a beat after the fusing: the two bodies stagger as one and topple together, then a low close on the seam.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.coconuts.jpg", "len": 12.23 }, { "id": "fists.keelhauled", "weapon": "fists", "title": "KEELHAULED", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "Dragged along the barnacled keel until his back is flayed in red stripes, blood clouding the water: grim, if a little murky.", "cine_why": "A tracking side shot along the hull under a shaft of light, then a close on the shredded back; atmospheric but one-angle.", "script_why": "Keelhauling a man along a barnacle-crusted hull under the sea: a fitting, nasty, piratical death.", "anim_why": "Red stripes on a flat body in murky water; barnacles barely drawn.", "fix": "Show the barnacles catching and tearing at each pass in close, and end on the flayed body floating up into the light, face to camera.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.keelhauled.jpg", "len": 13.35 }, { "id": "fists.death-mask", "weapon": "fists", "title": "DEATH MASK", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "Her face slammed into the stones, a bruised bloody eye and a face print in the blood pool; the promised blank, stripped face never shows.", "cine_why": "Small top-down print inserts after each slam, then the same tight medium and a static close.", "script_why": "Each slam prints his face sharper into the floor until his own head is left blank: an eerie, original idea.", "anim_why": "Plain bruise and drips on a flat face; the floor print is a faint outline.", "fix": "Deliver the image: lift her away with a smooth, featureless head while the floor holds a perfect face print, eyes open.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.death-mask.jpg", "len": 12.35 }, { "id": "fists.up-top", "weapon": "fists", "title": "UP TOP", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "He cracks apart like a jigsaw puzzle, jaw hanging open over a dark mouth with some blood: odd rather than horrific.", "cine_why": "An UP TOP! bubble and an impact frame, then the same flat medium and a static close.", "script_why": "Leaving his high five hanging and answering down low, the high five coming at the end: a decent gag.", "anim_why": "Puzzle-piece cracks drawn as plain lines on a flat body; little wound detail.", "fix": "Pay off the gag: the last piece of him, the raised palm, gets its high five as the rest falls apart in a held wide.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.up-top.jpg", "len": 12.66 }, { "id": "fists.acid-reflux", "weapon": "fists", "title": "ACID REFLUX", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 4, "script": 6, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "The final holds on his kneeling face melted to the teeth by green acid foam; vivid, but the promised belly holes and floor drop never show.", "cine_why": "One comic gut-punch impact, then long static two-shots of him kneeling; no tilt down, no floor-hole insert.", "script_why": "Stomach acid that burns its way out and takes him through the floor is a fresh, gross, fist-fitting idea.", "anim_why": "The melted jaw shows teeth, acid foam and bubbles; the rest of the body and the set stay flat.", "fix": "Animate the inside-out belly holes with the background showing through and the drop through the hissing floor hole.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.acid-reflux.jpg", "len": 12.33 }, { "id": "fists.hitchhiker", "weapon": "fists", "title": "HITCHHIKER", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Knocked off over the vent and boiled lobster-red, the skin blistered and raw, bubbles round his goggled eyes: decent.", "cine_why": "A side shot riding the turtle, a red bloom at the vent, then a static close of the boiled body.", "script_why": "Hitching a ride on the giant turtle that never notices the fight on its back: charming setup, thin payoff.", "anim_why": "The turtle and the boiled skin have texture; the kills on the shell are small and stiff.", "fix": "Show the vent's plume in close as he's knocked into it and the skin bubbling up live, then the turtle cruising on unaware.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.hitchhiker.jpg", "len": 13.35 }, { "id": "fists.mid-blown-pupil", "weapon": "fists", "title": "BLOWN PUPIL", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 3, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "One hook, he drops, and the only wound is a blown pupil with a trickle of blood from the eye: small and quiet.", "cine_why": "A THOK manga frame on the temple and a held close on the eyes on the floor: good beats for a short kill.", "script_why": "Death told only through one blown pupil and one pinpoint: a smart, subtle idea that's light on gore.", "anim_why": "Flat body and a plain eye; the blood is a few lines and a small pool.", "fix": "Push the close: the pupil swelling black in real time while the other eye stares, with blood seeping from the ear.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.mid-blown-pupil.jpg", "len": 8.21 }, { "id": "fists.mid-laid-down", "weapon": "fists", "title": "LAID DOWN", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 3, "cine": 5, "script": 5, "anim": 3, "brut_why": "Choked out and laid down with a little blood at the mouth and a small pool: barely brutal for an EPIC.", "cine_why": "A WHAP manga frame, then a sleeper hold in medium and a low close of her head on the floor.", "script_why": "Put to sleep for good and laid down like a child put to bed: a quiet, creepy beat but not much of a kill.", "anim_why": "A flat body and plain face; the sleeper hold itself is barely shown.", "fix": "Make the choke visible: her face darkening and the eyes bulging with burst vessels in a tight close before he lays her down.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.mid-laid-down.jpg", "len": 8.34 }, { "id": "fists.mid-cross-counter", "weapon": "fists", "title": "CROSS-COUNTER", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 3, "cine": 6, "script": 6, "anim": 3, "brut_why": "A cross to the face and blood down it as he slides to his knees: tidy, almost no gore for a LEGENDARY.", "cine_why": "Manga split-panels of the crossing punches, a KRAK freeze and a close as he slides down: the strongest camera here.", "script_why": "The cross-counter over his haymaker, his fist an inch short all the way to the floor: classic boxing-anime staging.", "anim_why": "Flat bodies; the only detail is a streak of blood on the face.", "fix": "Give the counter a real wound: his face caving round Faris's glove in slow motion, teeth spraying, before the slide.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.mid-cross-counter.jpg", "len": 8.01 }, { "id": "fists.mid-head-back", "weapon": "fists", "title": "HEAD BACK", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 3, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 3, "brut_why": "A broken nose fountaining, then he lies with blood over his face in a small pool: a mild nosebleed death.", "cine_why": "A SNAP impact, a profile of the tipped-back head and a low close on the floor: decent beats in a few seconds.", "script_why": "Doing the nosebleed advice wrong (head back) and drowning in it: a clever, grim little idea.", "anim_why": "The blood is red dots and a flat pool; the gurgle is not shown on the face.", "fix": "Hold the profile close as the blood runs into the throat, the cheeks puffing and red bubbling from the mouth, before he sinks.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.mid-head-back.jpg", "len": 7.66 }, { "id": "fists.mid-wrung-out", "weapon": "fists", "title": "WRUNG OUT", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "His trunk twisted like a towel with blood wringing out in red spirals; strong in the close, tiny in the final wide.", "cine_why": "A WHUD impact and one good close on the twisted torso, then a far wide for the final.", "script_why": "Wrung out like a wet towel by the tornado kick's follow-through: a vivid, weapon-true image.", "anim_why": "Red stripes over a white body read as the twist; little anatomical detail.", "fix": "End on the close, not the wide: the twisted trunk dripping, the face turned the wrong way round to the hips.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.mid-wrung-out.jpg", "len": 8.29 }, { "id": "fists.mid-glasgow-kiss", "weapon": "fists", "title": "GLASGOW KISS", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 6, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "Five crown-point punctures bleeding in her brow, shown in an inset, then a small band of blood on the floor close.", "cine_why": "A KRUNCH impact, a pop-up inset of the punctured brow and a low close: good use of a few seconds.", "script_why": "The headbutt that stamps Faris's crown into her forehead: a witty, signature idea.", "anim_why": "The punctures are five dots on a flat green inset; the body is plain.", "fix": "Hold a real close on the brow as the five holes well up and run into her eyes, instead of the tiny inset.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.mid-glasgow-kiss.jpg", "len": 8.26 }, { "id": "fists.mid-liver-shot", "weapon": "fists", "title": "LIVER SHOT", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 3, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 3, "brut_why": "Folded in half on the floor with a dark bruise spreading on his side and a small pool: mild.", "cine_why": "THUD impact, a pop-up inset of the bruise and a close of him curled up: reasonable for a mid.", "script_why": "The liver shot that folds a fighter in half, the bruise spreading like ink: real and specific, low on gore.", "anim_why": "The bruise is a dark patch with a red crack on a flat body.", "fix": "Hold a close as the bruise spreads under the skin in real time and he vomits blood, curled round the fist.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.mid-liver-shot.jpg", "len": 8.04 }, { "id": "fists.mid-opened-up", "weapon": "fists", "title": "OPENED UP", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 6, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "Her brow split and a curtain of blood over the face, ending face down in a pool: clear but small in frame.", "cine_why": "SHLIK, a pop-up inset of the split, a blind WHIFF and a KRAK finisher: well-cut beats for a mid.", "script_why": "A boxing cut that blinds her so she swings at nothing before the last blow: a good fight-true idea.", "anim_why": "The blood curtain is a flat red patch; little detail on the wound or face.", "fix": "Show the split brow and the blood curtain in a held close on her face as she swings blind.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.mid-opened-up.jpg", "len": 8.48 }, { "id": "fists.mid-jackknife", "weapon": "fists", "title": "JACKKNIFE", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 3, "brut_why": "A stomp that snaps him shut with a geyser of blood from the mouth, then a crushed red chest in a pool; brief and small.", "cine_why": "WHUD impact frame, the blood fountain and a low close; the final is a far wide.", "script_why": "Swept flat, then snapped shut like a book by a heel to the solar plexus: a punchy, physical idea.", "anim_why": "Flat body, a dark chest patch and a flat pool; the geyser is a spray of dots.", "fix": "Hold the jackknife moment in slow motion from low: head and feet meeting, the geyser in close, before the wide.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.mid-jackknife.jpg", "len": 8.23 }, { "id": "fists.mid-en-garde", "weapon": "fists", "title": "EN GARDE", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "mid", "status": "built", "brut": 3, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 3, "brut_why": "Out cold with her arms locked rigid, a trickle from the mouth and a small pool: knocked out more than killed.", "cine_why": "A THWACK manga frame, the stiff fall and a low close: fine but generic.", "script_why": "The fencing response (arms locked rigid on the knockout) is a real, specific idea; brutality is low.", "anim_why": "Flat body and plain face; the rigid arms are the only detail.", "fix": "Show the fencing response in slow motion from low and add the head's impact damage: blood from the ear, a dented temple.", "scorer": "O", "sheet": "img/62/fists/fists.mid-en-garde.jpg", "len": 8.21 } ]