[ { "id": "burst.three-on-a-match", "weapon": "burst", "title": "THREE ON A MATCH", "tier": "MYTHIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 5, "script": 8, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "One round each to three faces (cheek and teeth, eye, temple): the wounds are small; three bodies in a pool.", "cine_why": "The match close-up in the dark is moody, but several frames are near-black and the three-streak train never reads.", "script_why": "Never three on a match: one burst, one round each in the order the match lit them, the match burning on in dead fingers. Excellent.", "anim_why": "The match light and cigarettes are nice; the face wounds are small and plain.", "fix": "Light the three faces with the match as each round lands in slow motion, so every wound reads; drop the black frames.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.three-on-a-match.jpg", "len": 19.5 }, { "id": "burst.see-no-evil", "weapon": "burst", "title": "SEE NO EVIL", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 5, "script": 8, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "The bursts go through her hands into eyes, ears and mouth; blood around her hands, but the hands and the crop hide the wounds.", "cine_why": "Framed against the carved monkeys, but each burst uses the same angle and the final crops her to the edge.", "script_why": "The three wise monkeys taken literally: each burst through the hands into what they cover. Excellent.", "anim_why": "The stone monkey carving is detailed; the hands-over-face poses with blood, the wounds unseen.", "fix": "After the third burst, pull the hands away in a close-up: the eyes, ears and mouth all shot out, the monkeys behind her.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.see-no-evil.jpg", "len": 16.0 }, { "id": "burst.snells-window", "weapon": "burst", "title": "SNELL'S WINDOW", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 6, "script": 7, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "A torn thigh with bone and a blood cloud blooming up; he hangs, face plain.", "cine_why": "The Snell's window circle seen from below is a beautiful shot; the final is a plain medium on the floating body.", "script_why": "Under water you only see the sky through a circle, and he swims for it: poetic and fits the Deep.", "anim_why": "The window and the blood cloud have detail; the body is plain.", "fix": "End looking up through the window as his blood fills the circle of sky, with his dead face silhouetted in it.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.snells-window.jpg", "len": 15.6 }, { "id": "burst.spall", "weapon": "burst", "title": "SPALL", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 4, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "Steel shrapnel shreds his face: shards stuck in a torn, bloody face under the beanie.", "cine_why": "A black void with one medium angle; the steel cover barely reads (the tower arena renders black here).", "script_why": "Steel stops one round; three bursts on one spot and it comes through as shrapnel: smart and fits the burst.", "anim_why": "The shards and cuts in the face have detail; the set is black and the steel is barely drawn.", "fix": "Show the steel bulging and cracking in close-up from his side, then the shrapnel bursting into his face in slow motion.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.spall.jpg", "len": 17.6 }, { "id": "burst.fortune", "weapon": "burst", "title": "FORTUNE", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 6, "script": 8, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "A few holes and a pool; her dead face is intact; the rolled ball shows the face.", "cine_why": "The fisheye crystal-ball inserts are a strong device; the rest is plain wides (the forts arena renders black here).", "script_why": "She sees her death a beat ahead in her crystal ball and goes exactly where it shows: excellent.", "anim_why": "The glass ball has highlights; the body and the wounds are plain.", "fix": "Make the third round's wound big in the ball's curved, upside-down view, and end on that image held in the glass.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.fortune.jpg", "len": 16.4 }, { "id": "burst.last-resort", "weapon": "burst", "title": "LAST RESORT", "tier": "LEGENDARY", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 6, "script": 7, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Both arms shot to stumps, then a burst through the slide into his teeth: dead on his knees, blood pouring from the mouth.", "cine_why": "Clear staging, the 'go on.' beat, a low close final on the kneeling body.", "script_why": "Disarmed, he bites up his pistol and aims it with his head: dark, memorable.", "anim_why": "The stumps and the blood stream read; the teeth and slide damage are plain.", "fix": "A close-up of the shattered teeth around the pistol, blood running down the slide, with his eyes still aiming.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.last-resort.jpg", "len": 15.8 }, { "id": "burst.panorama", "weapon": "burst", "title": "PANORAMA", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 6, "script": 7, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Holes in the hand, chest and throat with a spray; she lies over the ledge, the wounds plain.", "cine_why": "The phone's PANO / PLAYBACK inset is a nice device, with one close blood burst; the rest is wide.", "script_why": "A panorama sweep catches Faris three times, then he's beside her: clever and original.", "anim_why": "The phone UI is detailed; the body and wounds are plain.", "fix": "Hold the final on the phone's finished panorama smearing her death, next to her real, torn throat.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.panorama.jpg", "len": 16.0 }, { "id": "burst.silt-out", "weapon": "burst", "title": "SILT-OUT", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "A jaw and shoulder wound inside a red cloud: murky and hard to see.", "cine_why": "Rising bubble curtains are a nice visual, but the brown-out keeps it murky.", "script_why": "Bubble trails rise as curtains that part round him: clever but hard to read.", "anim_why": "Bubble strings and silt have detail; the body is plain.", "fix": "Part the curtains in a clean close-up on his face as the burst takes the jaw, with the red cloud threading the bubbles.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.silt-out.jpg", "len": 16.0 }, { "id": "burst.the-triangle", "weapon": "burst", "title": "THE TRIANGLE", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "After the fall he's folded on the landing beside the glass triangle, in a pool; no visible wound.", "cine_why": "A KRRRK close-up as the cracks meet and one falling frame, then a static final (the tower arena renders black here).", "script_why": "Three rounds round him make three cracks, and three cracks that meet make a door: elegant and fits the three-round burst.", "anim_why": "The cracks are simple lines; the body and the glass triangle are flat shapes.", "fix": "End on a close-up of the glass triangle stuck upright in his body on the landing, his dead face in its reflection.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.the-triangle.jpg", "len": 17.0 }, { "id": "burst.three-legged-race", "weapon": "burst", "title": "THREE-LEGGED RACE", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 7, "cine": 5, "script": 8, "anim": 6, "brut_why": "His back is torn open to the ribs and organs, the partner tied dead beside him in a wide pool.", "cine_why": "Mostly side-on mediums with a 'come ON' beat; no close-up on the knot or the knife.", "script_why": "Tied at the ankle to his dead partner, he claws at the knot and is shot as he cuts: dark and original.", "anim_why": "Ribs, organs and the torn back have real detail; the scarf and the knife are simple.", "fix": "A close-up of the bloody scarf knot and the knife sawing at it, then the third round as he cuts.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.three-legged-race.jpg", "len": 18 }, { "id": "burst.punch-and-judy", "weapon": "burst", "title": "PUNCH AND JUDY", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 6, "script": 8, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Blood soaks through the striped canvas; the man behind is never shown, only the slumped puppets.", "cine_why": "Good booth framing, the THAT'S THE WAY TO DO IT banner and a push-in on the canvas.", "script_why": "'That's the way to do it!': he hides in a puppet booth and the show goes on after he stops. Excellent dark idea.", "anim_why": "The booth, the puppets and the slapstick are drawn; the blood is a flat red smear.", "fix": "Let the curtain fall to show his torn body under the puppets, with Punch still on his dead hand.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.punch-and-judy.jpg", "len": 16.0 }, { "id": "burst.knock-on-wood", "weapon": "burst", "title": "KNOCK ON WOOD", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "The rounds come through the wood into his hand and face: splinters and blood pouring down.", "cine_why": "A tight medium and the 'knock' close-up; the crate he knocks on isn't visible (the canyon arena renders black here).", "script_why": "He knocks on wood and the wood knocks back: a neat, readable gag.", "anim_why": "The splinters are drawn; the face wound is plain.", "fix": "A close-up of his splintered hand pinned flat to the wood, the third round's hole beside his face.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.knock-on-wood.jpg", "len": 15.2 }, { "id": "burst.tourniquet", "weapon": "burst", "title": "TOURNIQUET", "tier": "EPIC", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 5, "script": 8, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Both thighs bleed out under his own tourniquets, then a belly wound: he sits dying in a brimming pool, face under the helmet.", "cine_why": "A close on the belt drill, the rest mediums; the NOT ENOUGH beat is quiet.", "script_why": "He does everything right, belt then bootlace, and it's still not enough: grim and original.", "anim_why": "The belt and bootlace tourniquets are drawn; the wounds are flat red.", "fix": "A close-up of his proud face as the belt holds, then a slow push-in as the lap fills and the light goes from his eyes.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.tourniquet.jpg", "len": 16.9 }, { "id": "burst.three-in-a-row", "weapon": "burst", "title": "THREE IN A ROW", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 5, "script": 8, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "One burst along the middle row takes eye, bridge of the nose, eye: a torn face, blood running down the chalk.", "cine_why": "A crosshair insert and a static close on the grid; the burst itself is a quick spray.", "script_why": "Noughts and crosses: his O in the middle, and one burst is three in a row. Excellent fit for the burst.", "anim_why": "The chalk grid is simple and the face wound plain.", "fix": "A slow-motion close-up of the three rounds crossing the row through his face, then the chalk line drawn in his blood.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.three-in-a-row.jpg", "len": 15.0 }, { "id": "burst.polly", "weapon": "burst", "title": "POLLY", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Chest and neck wounds and a pool; the parrot stands on his chest, red on its feathers.", "cine_why": "Close-ups on the parrot's MISSED ME!, otherwise plain mediums.", "script_why": "The parrot keeps taunting after the pirate stops: a good dark joke.", "anim_why": "The parrot, feathers and hat are drawn; the wounds are plain.", "fix": "Hold a close-up of the parrot pecking at the open neck wound as it squawks MISSED ME.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.polly.jpg", "len": 15.0 }, { "id": "burst.tiffin", "weapon": "burst", "title": "TIFFIN", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "His own charge takes his legs off below the knee among scattered rice and dal, in a pool.", "cine_why": "LUNCH!, a crash zoom on the charge at his feet, then a static low final.", "script_why": "A stacked tiffin is three tins and a burst is three rounds: a neat local item that fits.", "anim_why": "Rice and dal bits; the stumps are plain red ends.", "fix": "Show the stumps raw with bone in the rice, and a close-up of the lid spinning to a stop by his face.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.tiffin.jpg", "len": 15.6 }, { "id": "burst.glass-eye", "weapon": "burst", "title": "GLASS EYE", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "The glass eye shatters out (KSSH) and two rounds go through the empty socket: a torn face, the eye on the floor.", "cine_why": "A KSSH close-up, then a plain low final on the body.", "script_why": "He taps his glass eye, not scared of losing it; the next two rounds use the socket. Neat.", "anim_why": "Eye halves and a spray; the socket wound is plain.", "fix": "End on a close-up of the glass eye halves looking up from the floor, the double-holed socket behind them.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.glass-eye.jpg", "len": 15.8 }, { "id": "burst.party-popper", "weapon": "burst", "title": "PARTY POPPER", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Chest and mouth wounds with confetti settling on him: small wounds.", "cine_why": "The popper burst and confetti tunnels, then a static final.", "script_why": "He celebrates too soon with a party popper: light and familiar.", "anim_why": "The confetti detail is nice; the wounds are plain.", "fix": "A slow-motion shot of the three rounds tunnelling through the falling confetti into his cheering mouth.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.party-popper.jpg", "len": 16.3 }, { "id": "burst.awning", "weapon": "burst", "title": "AWNING", "tier": "RARE", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "A broken neck and a bent body on the ledge; the compound shin doesn't read and there's little blood.", "cine_why": "The jump and a CRACK close; a static final.", "script_why": "The awning would have broken his fall, but the burst cuts it first: a decent map gag.", "anim_why": "The torn awning stripe is the one detail; the body is plain.", "fix": "A close-up of the shin bone out through the trouser and the neck bent back in the torn canvas.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.awning.jpg", "len": 15.0 }, { "id": "burst.trip", "weapon": "burst", "title": "TRIP", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "A few holes and a pool; he's folded over his knees with a dead face.", "cine_why": "A TRIP! close-up of the skidding rifle and a THUD faceplant, then a static medium.", "script_why": "The game's real thrown-gun trip turned into the kill: fitting but light.", "anim_why": "The skidding rifle reads; the body and wounds are plain.", "fix": "After the faceplant, a burst into his back at point-blank, held close with the dead face turned to camera.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.trip.jpg", "len": 15.7 }, { "id": "burst.sleeves", "weapon": "burst", "title": "SLEEVES", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 4, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Chest and throat holes; he hits the floor face first with his arms bound: small wounds.", "cine_why": "A close on the trapped arms, a SMACK faceplant, then a static low final.", "script_why": "You take your jacket off for a fistfight, not a gunfight: he ends straitjacketed. Funny and apt.", "anim_why": "The jacket binding the arms is a nice detail; the wounds are plain.", "fix": "A slow-motion faceplant with no hands to stop it, the face breaking on the boards.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.sleeves.jpg", "len": 14.2 }, { "id": "burst.guard-up", "weapon": "burst", "title": "GUARD UP", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 6, "cine": 5, "script": 6, "anim": 5, "brut_why": "Broken forearms with bone through the skin, crossed over a smashed face: teeth and an eye out.", "cine_why": "A tight medium and a quick burst, then a static low final.", "script_why": "The guard that can't stay up: broken arms raised again.", "anim_why": "The radius and ulna through the skin and the face wound have some detail.", "fix": "A close-up of him raising the floppy broken arms again, then the burst through them in slow motion.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.guard-up.jpg", "len": 14.6 }, { "id": "burst.side-on", "weapon": "burst", "title": "SIDE-ON", "tier": "COMMON", "kind": "film", "status": "built", "brut": 5, "cine": 5, "script": 7, "anim": 4, "brut_why": "Round one takes the tip of his face, the rest go through him: kneeling in a pool with a torn face.", "cine_why": "A 0.1x slow-motion beat as he steps between rounds; the atrium renders black here.", "script_why": "A burst's rounds are 65 ms apart, so he tries to slip between them side-on: clever and true to the weapon.", "anim_why": "The rounds and the wounds are plain.", "fix": "Hold the 0.1x shot as round two carves through his sucked-in gut, his face in profile watching it.", "scorer": "KILLPAGES-A", "sheet": "img/62/burst/burst.side-on.jpg", "len": 18.1 } ]