# smg.skin-cartoon · SPEED LINES · 0.1 s continuity audit (B, 28 Oct)

Checked on 0.1 s contact sheets (gore 5, 0.0-6.2) and full-size frames at every contact, reload and payoff beat.
- **Cast:** F = FARIS (R = trigger hand, L = support hand); D = FIDA (unarmed; R = her F arm, L = her B arm).
- **Props:**
  - the red cartoon SMG;
  - the spent mag (red, dropped) and the fresh mag (from his belt);
  - the dust puffs: hanging, pop, tell;
  - her severed arm;
  - the pieces;
  - the dust shape.
- **No casts** in this kill: nothing is inked.

| t (s) | Faris: hands | Fida: hands | props | issue found | fixed |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0.0 | R grip, L fore-end | fists up, low crouch | - | - | - |
| 0.1-0.4 | same | both arms swung back; legs become the wheel (real legs hidden, a soft blur disc + sweeping legs) | dust spits behind her; open speed strokes behind the wheel | (1) the wheel was too small to read (a brown blob under her); (2) COORD: its white arcs closed into a circle (no rings) | (1) the wheel radius doubled to the leg length; (2) no outline on the disc, the arcs replaced by straight open speed strokes |
| 0.48 | same | the launch: arms forward | - | - | - |
| 0.49-0.56 | same | (in transit: hidden) | a smear streak in her colour + speed lines; her puff hangs at 900 | - | the start puff lives 0.9 s, not 1.4 (it cluttered the right side) |
| 0.56 | the gun flinches UP the instant she pops in (her head under the muzzle) | POPS in front of him, a leg's length off his gun | a dust pop at the arrival (a scattered burst + a fan of dashes, no even ring) | COORD: a hook here put her head against his gun hands; no arm can reach his jaw past the gun | the hook becomes a FRONT KICK (a leg's reach), she pops in 27 units further out, and his gun flinches up |
| 0.6-0.66 | driven back a step (0.72), both hands stay on the gun | the knee chambers, then THE KICK: heel into his chest (0.05 s snap), leaning back | a white star at his chest (no ring) | - | - |
| 0.79 | recovering | (zips out: hidden) | her puff hangs at 846 | - | - |
| 0.9-1.1 | fires down into the puff, both hands | (away) | fat cartoon rounds; the puff shreds at 0.95 | - | - |
| 1.32 | - | POPS in behind him: R and L up (no gun between them from behind) | pop at 784 | - | - |
| 1.37-1.42 | - | R cocks, then THE HOOK to the back of his head | star at the back of his head | - | - |
| 1.45 | head snaps forward; buckles forward a step, both hands on the gun | follow-through | - | - | - |
| 1.56 | - | (zips out) | puff hangs at 770 | - | - |
| 1.74 | spins round (fc flips), both hands | - | - | - | - |
| 1.78-1.92 | fires down into the puff at 784 | - | the puff shreds at 1.82 | - | - |
| 1.98-2.08 | - | POPS in low in his face; L loads low (2.02), THE UPPERCUT (2.08) | pop at 780; star under his chin | - | - |
| 2.1 | head snaps back, both hands on the gun | follow-through | - | - | - |
| 2.22 | - | (zips out) | puff hangs at 780 | - | - |
| 2.32-2.6 | THE HOLD: steadies; looks up (2.46), then his head drops to the floor (2.6) | (away) | THE TELL: a small puff rises from the floor at 752 (2.55), little wisps rising off it | (1) the tell was small; (2) COORD: its swirl read as a dashed ring | (1) r 13; (2) the swirl replaced by rising wisps |
| 2.67-2.73 | the gun dips, then snaps onto the tell (both hands; the head doesn't turn) | - | - | - | - |
| 2.74 | fires | - | the rounds shred the old puff at 780 (2.77) on the way | - | - |
| 2.85 | firing | ARRIVES in the stream from the left: R forward, L back | four after-images hang behind her | - | - |
| 2.9 | firing | THE ARM: R arm off at the shoulder | STYLE limb off: round wet cap, spurting; the arm flies back and stays | - | - |
| 2.9-3.5 | firing (slow motion) | L swings back; hit springs on every round | stars on the hits; spurts | - | - |
| 3.56-3.62 | lets off | the after-images snap back into her; knocked back | - | - | - |
| 3.62-4.05 | holds the aim | skids back on her heels, L arm out for balance | dust off her heels | - | - |
| 4.1 | CLICK: empty, both hands | L claps to the stump | - | - | - |
| 4.18 | L to the mag well (R on the grip throughout) | L on the stump | - | - | - |
| 4.24 | L strips the mag | crouches | the spent mag drops, bounces (boing, 4.42) and stays by his front foot | the mag read too small | drawn 1.45x (cartoon proportion) |
| 4.38 | L at his belt: the fresh mag in hand | the wheel again (4.38-4.9), leaning way back | fresh mag drawn in his L hand 4.38-4.6 | - | - |
| 4.6 | L slaps the mag in | - | `mech.magin` | - | - |
| 4.72-4.8 | L to the charging handle, racks it | - | `mech.slide` | - | - |
| 4.9 | L back on the fore-end, braced | THE LAUNCH from 702: L forward | - | - | - |
| 4.93 | fires full auto down the floor, both hands | (in transit) | smear streak | - | - |
| 4.98 | firing | mid-run in the stream at 718 (a body length and more short of him), after-images behind her | - | COORD: the burst happened on top of him | the last run stops at 718 (he stands at 812) |
| 5.04 | firing (slow motion) | APART (XT): all four limbs off, head pop, radial pop | pieces with round caps | the trunk slid to his feet and the soul rose over his gun | the stream knocks the pieces back (push -70): the trunk lies about 90 units from him, and the soul rises clear on the left |
| 5.1-5.5 | holds the trigger, rocks with the recoil | - | pieces fly and skid; pool (gore 4+) | - | - |
| 5.6-6.2 | lets off; lowers the gun (6.2) | - | the soul rises from the trunk | - | - |
| 5.44-7.6 | lowers the SMG | - | THE DUST SHAPE: a soft cloud in her running shape, holds ~1.1 s, blows away right | read as a figure of white beads (bone-like) | rebuilt as a haze + big soft overlapping puffs |
| 7.6-9.0 | holds, the gun low | - | the mag, the arm, the pieces, the pool | - | - |

Checks:
- No faces: blank heads; her cat-ear hat is off.
- No bones; nothing painted on the bodies; all gore through K58.STYLE.
- Two hands accounted for at every beat.
- The props land and stay: the mag, the arm, the pieces.
- Every impact is a star shape (no rings).

THE LADDER (each level ends its own way; ending58 false):
- **XT:** all four limbs off, head pop with brain bits, radial pop, pool. The pieces are knocked back away from him; the soul rises clear on the left.
- **VH:** both legs + head pop, pool.
- **H:** one leg + a smaller head pop.
- **M:** her other arm off (it flies back, away from him). She is knocked back dead; the head stays.
- **LOW:** a spurt; knocked back dead.
- **VERY LOW:** a star + sparks + a boing; she bounces back off the stream, sits up dazed, stars circling (she lives).
- (The M/LOW bodies first flew into his feet; their push now goes back, away from him.)

FINAL numbers (28 Oct ~01:45): perf p95 5.0 ms, max 17.4 (machine load ~20) · playall 0 problems at gore 0-5 · maps 17 live, deep skip.