# golden.mid-the-bite-test · HAYMAKER (mid) · continuity audit (NEW-4, 28 Oct)

Scrubbed at 0.1 s scene steps (`/Volumes/Workspace/Scratch/n4/sheets/final/golden/mids/hay/final/`):
- `HM_contact_0.0.jpg`: guard up, the windmill, the haymaker and its four, the fling;
- `HM_contact_1.5.jpg`: the shoulder roll and the hold.

Low gore: `HM_low_g0..g3.jpg`.

Times are scene seconds.
- A = Faris: the golden pistol in his FRONT (right) hand throughout. It is in his fist for the punch. The BACK hand stays at the hip.
- V = Fayiz (purple): bare-handed, guard up.
- Footprint ±120 (AX = C-34, VX = C+30; the body flung about a body length right). It plays on all 17 dry maps.
- The camera roll is pinned at 0.

| t | Faris: front / back hand | Fayiz: front / back hand | props | issue | fixed |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0.0-0.62 | THE WINDMILL: the gun hand circles forward round the shoulder twice (low, back, over the top, forward), the gun along the swing, the body coiling back / at the hip | guard up, a step in; leans warily back from the circling gun (0.4) | a gold trail behind the gun: an open arc with a short fading tail | the trail closed into a full ring round him | the tail is 0.12 s (≤ about 270°), so it always reads as motion |
| 0.62-0.93 | THE HAYMAKER rising from his boots (slow-mo); the muzzle sweeps up the man / at the hip | guard | the arc trail | — | — |
| 0.7 | round 1 inside the swing / at the hip | the knee (a visible tear); the knee buckles | — | — | — |
| 0.77 | round 2 / at the hip | the raised guard arm off at the shoulder (a wet cap, the stump pumping), flung up and back | the arm lands and stays | — | — |
| 0.84 | round 3 / at the hip | the chest; rocked back and up | — | — | — |
| 0.91 | round 4 / at the hip | the head (XT / VH / H) | a local flash | — | — |
| 0.91-1.01 | the follow-through, high / at the hip | FLUNG: the body turns and is thrown up and away about a body length | the pieces land and stay | — | — |
| 1.0-1.8 | the arm high (follow-through) / at the hip | dead; the soul rises clear | the pool | — | — |
| 1.8-2.2 | lowers the gun, rolls his shoulder / at the hip | dead | — | — | — |

L / VL:
- L: the four rounds go over his head and the follow-through clonks him with the gold-heavy gun (sparks, a bonk); dazed sit.
- VL: watching the windmill makes him dizzy and he sits.

Not visible as a fault, but noted:
- Not revolver SLIP: nobody slips anything. Faris throws the punch himself and the gun fires inside his own swing.
- Sound: its own table (the scuff of his feet planting, the windmill whooshes rising, the heavy whoosh of the haymaker, the fling and landing, the shoulder roll).